Thursday, July 28, 2011








Jurassic Park: Evolution









The Five Deaths. That is what locals called the islands Dr. Hammond once inhabited with theme park genetically enginered dinosaurs. 38 years on, and the islands lay somewhat untouched. Some say that the greatest virtue of man is perhaps his curiosity, but in the case of the five islands inhabited by unnatural theme park dinosaurs, perhaps things would have been best left untouched.






Incidents in 2020 and 2022, when a Plesiosaur was spotted on the shores of a Mexican beach, and Pteranadon’s sighted nesting in the Sierra Madre Occidental mountain ranges in Western Mexico should have ensured people of the danger of the islands. However, to some it only made them more alluring. But since the incident involving Dr. Alan Grant and the Kirby family on Isla Sorna, not many had yet attempted to return to the islands except for quick scientific purposes or to be sure the islands were secure.






Clear blue sky and crystal clear water. Perfect conditions for a day of sightseeing. The bullet shaped plane took off with ease and with secrecy as it carried its 15 or so passengers for their tour leaving the Central American Pacific Coast. An announcement came through the speakers. The rough voice of a Mexican woman informed the passengers that they would be arriving at Isla Sorna Island shortly and that in the meantime they should enjoy the view from the viewing windows. A girl sat in the back row of the plane looking nervous, twiddling her thumbs.






“Pa, isn’t this place supposed to be bad? Dr. Grant’s book says so. I read it again last night.” She peered down at her book with comfort, blushing. “Chase, for goodness sake. That book was written a long time ago. I did not pay a bloody fortune for you to sit here and complain. Just relax, once the plane connects to the track around the island we’ll be far away from any harm.” He was right, to an extent.






In an attempt to gain revenue from the disastrous Five Deaths Islands, InGen, with new technology, developed a way for people to see the creatures on Isla Sorna, but in a way that kept them safe. Planes had been developed to fly to the island and connect to a track that weaved through Isla Sorna, developed from some of the old systems (although most was higly damaged due to Hurricane Clarissa which was the initial reason the island had to be evacuated.) It was to be like a rollercoaster that would enable the tourists to see the island and leave unharmed by detaching from the track and flying home.






To build the track had not come cheap, and tickets came at a price. The track had to be fully secured with laser fencing and kept far away from the Pteranadon 'birdcage' which had accidently been left open from a previous incident. The whole operation however, had to be kept top secret due to laws against people entering the islands.






Many court cases involving Dr. Alan Grant had finally come to an end in March 2015 stating that no one was to enter the islands without a necessary permit for research (much to the displeasure of Dr. Grant.) The tourist project InGen was undertaking (under a ‘scientific’ permit) was to be the last mistake InGen would ever make.






“Attention passengers. We are about to make our landing on the entrance strip to the Island Isla Sorna. Please ensure that your seatbelt is fastened. We will be entering the island shortly and your tour will begin.” Chase looked to the nervous man across the plane who had caught her attention. He had a kind face, with dark locks of hair. The expression on his face was hard to distinguish. He looked both excited, and with a sense of anger and anticipation.






As the plane lowered, an echoic ‘clink’ was heard as the plane attached itself to the track which had emerged through the bush as they had got closer to their destination. A nervous humming of conversation could be heard from all over the plane. A pompous Arab man (perhaps with a hefty oil inheritance) expressed how the trip was already a, “waste of money” and how, “it’s been an hour and we haven’t seen a damn thing yet.”






“And we won’t be.”






The voice had come from the man with dark hair sitting across the plane from Chase. He stood up and snatched a small silver pistol from his belt and pointed it at the head of the driver’s chair.






“My name is Eric Kirby, head of the department of Law Enforcement and Safety of the Five Deaths Islands. You are under arrest for undertaking an illegal tourist campaign to a restricted area by law. Turn off the engine.”






The plane sat frozen in silence.






The two pilots exchanged a look at each other, then each reached for a weapon of their own and both shot at Kirby. All bullets missed, some shattering the windows, others killing a few of the passengers. The vehicle veered to one side coming off the track. A shot had hit a latch detaching it from the track. Screams were heard from all over. The vehicle sped through the trees and hit the ground with an enormous “THOOMP”.






Groans and muttering were heard after some time. At least some had survived. Not that they had much of a chance. The massive body of a decaying dinosaur lay on the forest floor, bigger than any dinosaur anyone had ever recorded. The worst fears of the scientists were true. The dinosaurs were slowly evolving and growing due to the fast repopulation of the herbivores on the island. They were bigger and stronger than ever.






Chase managed to free herself from the debris after some time, looked up, and screamed.

FanFic Summary & Review Five




Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
 Summary
A quartet of humanoid turtles trained by their mentor in Ninjitsu must learn to pull together in order to face the menace of Shredder and the Foot Clan.

My Review of a Fan fiction piece based on the above narrative.

Bloodlines” Chapter One
"Cowabunga dudes” soon as I saw this saying by these green heroes in the fourth paragraph of this fan fiction I knew I was going to enjoy the ride reading this story. The Author writes with a good flow, which keeps my attention. I enjoyed the descriptive presence of the personalities and characters from the cartoon. Leo, Donny, Raph, Mikey. And couldn’t help but miss the bad Shredder, even the name puts a smile on my face. And his fumbling side kicks Bebop and Rock Steady (always thought there names were cool). Very good read, 5 stars.

References

Fan fiction Net. Retrieved July 28, 2011 from: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1975646/1/Teenage_Mutant_Ninja_Turtles_Bloodlines

Image. Retrieved July 28, 2011 from: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0100758/

Internet Movie Database. Retrieved July 28, 2011 from: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0100758/

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

FanFic Summary and Review Four

Ohana – in Hawaiian means no one is left out, it means family, it means most of all unconditional love “Aloha O’e”.


Lillo and Stitch Fantasy Delusion

Summary

This is a story about Lilo in high school and getting tricked by evil Mertle's good-looking cousin Rick (who is also evil and a big-time cheating, lying two-timer). Lilo believes that Rick will be her soul mate and is too blinded by foolish puppy love to see the real truth about him. Lilo ignores Stitch more than ever and the little blue alien is saddened deeply. He thinks Lilo doesn't want to be his friend anymore and soon grows jealous (and even more overprotective)... He follows them to a social event, staying out of sight. While Lilo goes to the ladies' room, evil Rick hurries off to a different girl named Lora Lee (who is one of his many many girlfriends). Evil Mertle is there as well. When Stitch overhears Rick talking trash about Lilo (Mertle and Lora laugh maniacally), he is enraged. Immediately, he attacks Rick openly in public and Mertle shrieks in surprise. (Lora runs off. -Coward!) She tells Rick that Stitch is Lilo's weird ugly blue dog and the attack is ultimately Lilo's fault and she was to blame. Lilo, at that time, returns due to all the commotion. She is embarrassed to death and is very angry at Stitch. Tension between the long-time friends forms and things are not going well for poor sad Stitch (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2857805/1/Lilo_Stitch_Fantasy_Delusion)

My Review

This Fantasy Delusion did not convince me at all! Lilo and Stitch is about “Ohana” Family! Unity! Laying your life down for a genuine friend. Lilo and Stitch share this reality, a sense of belonging, having a place in the world, being unique and loved is what the story is really about.

Stitch shook his head. "No …She has forgotten me..." Jumba set his creation back on the floor. "Still...Jumba make Stitch look human...maybe? Meega want to be bigger and taller! Help, Jumba... Please help Stitch? Somehow?”

Poor old Stitch thinking he has to change his appearance to be noticed and accepted by Lilo. A Selfish and deluded fantasy, manifests its name perfectly!

References

FanFiction.Net. Retrieved July 28, 2011, from: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2857805/1/Lilo_Stitch_Fantasy_Delusion

Youtube Video. Retrieved July 28, 2011, from:

FanFic Summary & Review Three

CATS

"Based on 'Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats' and other poems by T.S. Eliot, the musical takes place in a junkyard where the local cats are auditioning to be chosen by their leader, Old Deuteronomy, to journey to the Heavyside Lair to be reborn. In the end, the former glamour cat, Grizabella - turned dishevelled outcast is chosen by Deuteronomy to receive the prized additional life" (Stage Agent, 2011).


“Jellicle cats are each give three names each, one name given by their human owners, one name that is unique and fits only that cat's personality, and one name that is so divine that only the cat knows it and still contemplates over it (The Naming of Cats)” (Musicals Dot Net, 2011).

Who am I and What's Become of Me?Is a Fan fiction prose I read from this site:  
http://jelliclejunkyard.wetpaint.com/page/Fan-Fiction and it reads,

What am I thought of? What do you care!
I’m thought of as nothing but me.
You may think that’s good, or that it’s okay,
But when I am me, there is nothing to be.

For although people think, I’m energetic that’s all,
Its not what I am inside,
Because what I show is hyper and sweet,
I know I don’t fit into this Tribe.

I scream and I jump, but do I really care?
Of course not, I’m blank through my mind.
And when catching mice, or seeking for friends,
I’m the only thing I want to find.

My mama don’t know what’s become of me,
She says I need to be more mature,
But I am stuck, cause I’m not kitten nor am I a cat,
Not brave or bold and not that pure.

And now, it’s too late, my time has long passed,
For, when I act not at all girly,
The cats, they all laugh, and then they walk past,
They know that I’m not acting like me.

What do I do then? I curl up and cry.
I watch all cats proudly walk past.
I can’t go to mama, and the toms just ignore.
Why would they want me, Missy-No-Class?

A miserable excuse I am for a cat,
Not stealthy, no moonlight eyes,
I am known as “The Kitten” and whenever I hear it
A small part within me dies.

And so, what to do, don’t look at me,
For now you surely should know,
That I am Etcetera, do you know what that means?
And so on, and so on, and so on….

The voice of Etcetera the Kitten is employed in this piece. Early in the piece Etcetera tells of the human perspective of her nature, in the cat world the author expresses her disconnection from friends and being misunderstood by her Mama. And when she tries to act like a female she’s not taken seriously. Her journey is a coming of age told well through the eyes of this author. Etcetera on her quest to establish her divine name and her place in the Jellicle family. The piece is framed well and stays true to the ideals of the story with regards to the importance of a felines name. I’ve seen the musical on DVD would love to see it in theatre in future.

References

Image. Retrieved July 28, 2011, from: http://google.com.

Musicals Dot Net. Retrieved, June 28, from:

Stage Agent. Retrieved June 28, 2011, from: http://www.stageagent.com/Shows/View/851

The Jellicle Junkyard. Retrieved, June 28, from: http://jelliclejunkyard.wetpaint.com/page/Fan-Fiction




Samurai Pizza Cats

Plot Summary
The pizza-delivery service Samurai Pizza Cats are also young samurai crime-fighters in their spare time, ready to spring into action from their headquarters above the pizza parlour whenever someone is in trouble. Protecting their myopic Princess and the city from forces led by The Big Cheese, they get into hilarious, action-packed scrapes, but always come out on top, mainly because the baddies are more incompetent than nefarious. Written by Cynan Rees <cynanrees@hotmail.com>

“The New Adventures of the Samurai Pizza Cats”
A fan fiction written by Cerviche. This particular series consists of 6 episodes. Episode one The Battle Continues part one, episode two The Battle Continues part two, Episode three Ninja Crows have a Crappy Job, Episode four Kitty Slickers, Episode five Night of the Living Pizza’s and Episode six Chasing Forever. The writer stays true to the plot storyline. As a child I always found the narrator of this cartoon extremely funny. Big Cheese, Speedy, Polly and other super characters bring back memories. “Chasing forever “ is an adventure I can certainly imagine on the screen, 5 stars.

References

Cerviche, G & LoGatto, A. My Fanfics. Retrieved, July 28. 2011, from: http://guidocx17.tripod.com/Fanfic.htm

Image. Retrieved July 28, 2011 from: 

Rees, C. The Internet Movie Database (1990). Retrieved July 28, 2011, from: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0122834/plotsummary

FanFic Summary & Review ONE

My Favourite Scene from the Movie!See LINK :o)




West Side Story (Musical)
 Plot Summary

"Westside story is the award winning adaptation of the classic romantic tragedy, Romeo and Juliette. The feuding families become two warring New York City gangs- the white Jets led by Riff and the Puerto Rican Sharks, led by Bernardo. Their hatred escalates to a point where neither can coexist with any form of understanding. But when Riff's best friend (and former Jet) Tony and Bernardo's younger sister Maria meet at a dance, no one can do anything to stop their love. Maria and Tony begin meeting in secret, planning to run away. Then the Sharks and Jets plan a rumble under the highway - whoever wins gains control of the streets. Maria sends Tony to stop it, hoping it can end the violence. It goes terribly wrong, and before the lovers know what's happened, tragedy strikes and doesn't stop until the climactic and heartbreaking ending" (Internet Movie Database, 2011).

My Review

I personally enjoyed the musical and dance theatre incorporated in this take on the age old tale of Romeo and Juliet. A universal story really, to this day I still find the actors and actresses quite corny. The stand out characters for me are the minor characters, especially Anita and Bernardo who play the role of  Puerto Rican's really well. Natalie Wood had the looks but lacked magic and presence! As a youngster I cried when I saw Bernardo die in the movie, he plays a very good big brother to Maria, to this day I still ponder about what would've happened if Bernardo lived and Maria died. In my eyes Anita and Bernardo are the real Romeo and Juliet of this film!

References

Internet Movie Database (2011). Retrieved, July 21, 2011, from:
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0055614/plotsummary

Official Website "West Side Story" Retrieved, July 21, 2011, from: http://www.westsidestory.com/site/level2/archives/fact/faq.html

Youtube.com. Retrieved, July 22, 2011, from: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qy6wo2wpT2k

Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Oliver's Fanfic Draft

"It seems that the city has grown upward since last time I came here."
I sounded full of machismo and bravery, but secretly the city has always astounded and terrified me. I know that underneath all of the glowing lights and entertainment venues, there is some secret... thing, a group or organisation, operating everything in town. That feeling lingered for some time.
"Come on now, no need for that," I clapped my hands on my cheeks, attempting to let go of the absent dread. I journeyed toward the closest fast food joint, my stomach worming and squirming and writhing in agony.
As I entered and found my place in line, I suddenly caught sight of a figure, maybe six feet in height. I couldn't get anymore details because it disappeared when my gaze wandered, but I didn't worry too much.
"Next please!"
I shook myself back into reality, eschewing that weird thing I saw with a firm hand. The counter girl greeted me with a sweet smile, not too big and beaming, thank goodness.
"So what would you like?" she asked me politely.
"Uhh, I think I'll have a double cheeseburger and fries, no drink thank you, and takeaway please."
She blitzed her lightningbolt fingers across her board of buttons, the speed gained through ages and ages of experience it seemed.
"Okay, that's eight dollars ten."
I handed her a ten dollar note. Somehow I felt a bit awkward handing her money, but at least I get food out of it.
Ka-ding!
The delightful and cheerful sound of capitalism- I mean the cash register, rang out as she replaced the ten dollar note with three coins. Their dull cracks as they left their crowded territories felt strangely satisfying.
"And one dollar ninety cents change." she said as she handed me my severely depleted funds.
"Cool, thank you." I said as I retrieved my meal-in-a-bag. It was warm and comforting, and about to end up in my belly very soon.
'Hmm... should I stay here or go somewhere else?' I wondered.
The figure had left my subconscious previously, but he reappeared just as suddenly, and not just in my head.
He was looking straight at me, his piercing, frozen gaze loitered around the back of my eyes, trying to break down the wall to my thoughts. I tried to break the line of sight, but his magnetism was just too sickly sweet to let go of.
"Hey..." I said as I reached my hand out and moved forward.
Just then, he darted into the toilets nearby. His 'power' had left me, and I managed to half-heartedly give chase. I dared not enter the women's toilets, so I entered the men's instead, knowing full well the embarrassment and beatings I would receive if I didn't.
Thankfully there was no one else relieving themselves in the toilets, so I should be able to hear him if I listen closely. My heart was drumming, the bass thuds resounding through my ears like concert hall orchestras. I tried calming myself down, reducing my concerts to a simple pair of bongos beating out a one-two rhythm. I can't give anything away.
Each step I took, I heard a slight brush of fabric in one of the stalls. I really hoped it was him. The brushing sound continued, meaning I could easily home in on where he was.
I stood in front of a rather clean and almost sterile stall. This was where the sound was coming from. My head was burning. My stomach was hollow. I couldn't wait any longer.
I carefully raised one knee, lifting up the toe slightly to make sure it's out of the way. Summoning up all of my nervous energy, I let out a loud grunt of exertion and literally blew the door off of its hinges.
"Aaaaahh! Why you do this? Why?! Fucking stupid kid!"
Damn! It wasn't him.

Reference on who the figure will be: http://streetsofrage.wikia.com/wiki/Shiva

This is my draft so far (it's going to be a Streets of Rage fanfic, just so you know). I'll need to ask Karen if swearing in the fanfic is a bit too much. If so, I'll change that last part slightly.

Oliver's Fanfic Reviews

www.fanfiction.net/s/2945837/1/Halflife_Fulllife_Consequences


Half Life: Full Life Consequences
This fanfic is based on a game called Half-Life 2, and the author writes about the story's main character named John Freeman trying to save his brother Gordon Freeman (main character in Half-Life 2) from a "final boss" character. Throughout the story, we can tell that John Freeman's journey to rescue his brother is fraught with danger. Sometimes it seems the most simplistic "road blocks" if you will, are the most dangerous to John Freeman, as danger can be anywhere.

Even though this fanfic is humourously (and possibly intentionally) misspelled, the author has seemingly tried very hard to make their idea come to life in a mix of narrative and dialog. John Freeman's own speech is very convoluted and drawn-out, making us feel that, even though he has no time to find his brother, he has the time to come into conflict with various lifeforms throughout. The development is also quite a problem, as John Freeman, who has no real emotional development at all, is basically straight out of his office and thrown into a race to save his brother. Overall though, it was quite a whimsical and funny piece riddled with cliches. As well as this, the grammatical and spelling errors seem to almost uplift it to a state where it might've been badly written intentionally to gain notoriety through the site. That must have worked, as it has spawned a youtube creation of the same name and based on his series, here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHxyZaZlaOs



Wangan Star
(Note: Last names come first in Japanese)
This fanfic is based off of the manga series 'Wangan Midnight' and the game series of the same name. The author writes about the main character Sasaki Jotaro and his journey to become a notorious racer of the Wangan route, or Bayshore route in english. Throughout the story, he is helped along in his 'quest' by his friends Inoue Shinya and Nakamura Ichigo, who each have their own vehicles they use to race. They are also challenged by many other racers along the Wangan to see who can control, or 'rule' this amazingly long stretch of highway.

Seemingly a homage to the old days of the Mid Night Club along the same Wangan in Japan, this story brings A LOT of the cars in the story to life. Excruciating detail is put into naming the vehicles and engines, telling me that the author knows a lot about cars in general. Also, seeing as they wrote this story, they must have a passion for racing, or they may just like the manga series. However, the story is very hard to follow in some places, and the repetition of the word 'screamed' becomes more tedious and boring the further on the story goes, which made me want to stop halfway through. Overall, the story was a wonderful, action-packed read. The author managed to not clog up the whole story with romance and 'fluff' as they sometimes call it, and their knowledge of cars helped to engage me in the car-centric storyline. Then again, being a car-centric storyline, it suffers from a very closed audience and the use of language in the story is grounds for immediate dislike from normal readers. I'd recommend it to car enthusiasts who understand the language used, and people who have read the manga series, and/or played the games.



Dogfight: Training The Experienced
Inspired by the game series "Ace Combat", the author of this fanfic writes about the main character Captain Mark "Puke" Greenfield, a pilot in the VFC-13 Saints which is most likely a team of airforce pilots stationed at their base in Nevada. He and his wingman Parker are putting a group of new marine and navy pilots, affectionately named "nuggets", out on a training flight. Mark and Parker are meant to be their aggressor pilots and flight leads for this flight, and it turns out that things up in the air are more difficult than they seem when looking from the ground.

The author does a good job describing each and every components in and around the jet and the base itself, even going so far as to word out the abbreviations given. Because of this, the story can be hard to follow if you hadn't been reading closely. The author also expands on the feelings of the pilots, showing that even when they're in the air concentrating on their flying, manoeuvering and shooting, their thoughts may sometimes go elsewhere. One example is when they are refuelling in mid-air, where Mark, Don (another aggressor pilot) and Parker are talking about how "It's a good lunch break to be on, but we never get any food." In this case, they're talking about their jets being "fed" fuel, while they get nothing to eat while on their "lunch break," showing that the simplest thing can mean a lot to a pilot. Other than the above, the use of simple sentences while the characters talk on the ground (I.E "How was the flight?" "Same as usual.") gives us insight into how lonely they are up in the air, which translates to their dealings on the ground. This just goes to show that they are at their most comfortable up in the air. Overall, apart from a few misplacement of letters and a few grammar mistakes, this story was excellently written, making full use of the radio chatter up in the air and the simple, albeit constantly repeated, sentence structure helping to speed up the spoken dialogue throughout.



Streets of Rage: The New Recruits
Based on the popular SEGA game series Streets of Rage, this fanfic centers around the 3 main characters in the first game: Axel Stone, Adam Hunter and Blaze Fielding. The author has stated that this story is a prologue to the first game, as it involves the three being recruited into the police force's new "Gang Unit," which deals with the increasing amounts of gang activity in the city. However, they don't use guns or cuffs like normal police officers, they use their fists to take down the criminals.

The fanfic has a lot of action, in the style of fight scenes and attention to detail in the case of attacks and the condition of the characters during these fight scenes. Also, we can tell that the two male characters are quite attracted to the female character (Blaze Fielding) through how they act around her, and how they treat her. She puts on a brave face however, and also quite enjoys the attention she garners from the two, saying that "It's okay, it's good for my self esteem." This makes her feel different from the traditional helpless and needy female character that currently fills up the Twilight series. Instead, she is portrayed as a "tough as nails," smart-talking, fist-fighting police officer, which is most likely seen as an empowering role for a woman. Overall, aside from minor yet repetitive grammar mistakes (like using they're instead of their) and little change in spoken dialogue, this fanfic makes up for all of that by taking full advantage of the premise and the situation to add in as much action as they could. This makes for an adrenaline-fuelled story, filled with fights and grisly detail for the real fans of the series.


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7140300/1/Insert_Wandering_Kamikaze_Shrubs_Here


Insert Wandering Kamikaze Shrubs Here
Completely based on the indie game phenomenon known as Minecraft, this fanfic is about a group of people who call themselves the ACMSES (Anti-Cliche and Mary Sue Elimination Society), namely two members called Michael and Tash. They are playing Minecraft one night at the "Library" and as stories like this go, they come across a blatant Mary Sue called (a). (a) has installed herself into their server and has begun to wreak havoc by destroying their fort and rendering them relatively dead. (a) isn't the worst of their problems though, as their enemies from the "Society" begin to place themselves in their server. This whole catastrophe then culminates into a dramatic TNT explosion, which crashes the server and forcefully removes Michael and Tash's enemies, as well as themselves.

Full of wit, sarcasm and the occasional internet "meme," this work of fanfiction throws readers into a complicated series of events, which may utterly confuse most people. This fanfic also leaves readers unable to piece together who most of the characters were, namely the "Society" (however they do have an Author's Note at the beginning, which explains to readers that they can learn more about them if they read their other fanfics). Besides all that though, this is quite a well written piece of narrative. It does have some cliche word choices ("Yeah well my British instinct says that you need a cup of tea...") and missing punctuation in random places, which makes a few sentences seem quite clunky and overused. Also, this fanfic is not to be read by people who have never heard/played Minecraft before as a lot of the terminology and creatures, especially Creepers, come from the actual game itself. Overall, it's a rollickingly good read which keeps interest for a long time with its wordplay and internet lingo, plus the cliches allow us to understand and navigate through the narrative with ease.

The Legend of Zelda: Fan Fiction Reviews


This particular story is well written and takes a nice spin on the original characters story line.
In the game "Ocarina of Time" you are introduced to Sheik, he is apparently one of the last remaining members of his people, the Sheikah and he helps you ('Link') on your quest.
*SPOILER if you haven't played the game*
In the game though it turns out that Sheik is in fact the Princess Zelda in disguise.

In this particular alternate Hyrule Sheik has been portrayed as the male he claimed to be in the game.
Living a lonely life as an out cast and drifter he comes across a wolf who has familiar blue eyes.
Now I loved this cross over because as you may not know in another Zleda game, "Twilight Princess" Link is transformed in to a wolf and he is recognised only by his blue eyes and strange markings.
They fast become companions, enjoying each others company and are then forced to be battle partners when they are suddenly attacked by a common enemy.

Then there is an all mighty twist ending that would shock any "The Legend of Zelda" fan!!!

I found this story interesting to read and it held my attention to the point I was skim reading ahead to find out what happens.
I love the development of the Sheik charater and the involvement of Link.
All and all I really enjoyed it and I would like to read more from this author.

oOo



This story is based on the Zelda game "Majora's Mask" which is one of the best out of the whole franchise.
This take on it focuses on the more intimate details of Link's thought process which you are normally not privy to during game play.
The use of Tatl is wonderful as I personally found her to be an annoying brat and the author has definitely portayed her as such.
It is still set in the original setting and uses the original characters as they are but I found the internal dialogue enlightening.

The whole story could becoming boring as I already know how the story goes but from what I can tell the author is planning on laying out the time line in a more linear style rather than the jumping back and forth through time like you experience in the game.

oOo


Based seven years after the happenings of "Ocarina of Time" this story is a wonderfully written adaptation on what could have been had Link not gone back to being a young boy.
Choosing to stay an adult and becoming the Head Guard to the Royal Family Link is portrayed as a hardened and independent individual, toughen up by his past and wanting to live an easy life.
The dialogue is pretty spot on, exactly how I would imagine the characters to talk and act, even if Link does come across as a jerk sometimes and the creative carrying on from the original game to this twist of fate is very compelling.
A very well written and original storyline.

oOo


Told from the point of view of Links trusted horse Epona this is a charming tale of the basic happenings from "Ocarina of Time". Short and simple this isn't much of a stretch for ones imagination, told in a timeline fashion laying out the game play.
But due to it being from a 'minor' characters p.o.v (minor in the sense she is really only used for travel, but I would argue she is one of the best parts of the game) and told in such an innocent and naive sort of way makes this short story worth the time.

oOo


I love this idea! Its simple but an affective way to go about writing a Fan Fiction. You take the Seven Deadly Sins and assign them to a character each.
So far the author only has three sins down; Envy, Rage and Gluttony, but they have handed them out accordingly.

Envy goes to Midna for her displeasure towards the 'Light Realm', Rage to Gannondorf of course and Gluttony to Wolf Link (mentioned in my first review).

Each individual story is a small snippet out of the over all story that is contained in this land of Hyrule and offers some insight and/or back story to the characters.

Although short the writing is well done and I am interested in reading the remaining sins and to whom she will allocate them.

oOo

Wow!! I finished at one minute to mid-night! haha...
I will admit I found it hard to get in to reading these fan-fics let alone having to write about them, but I hope my reviews live up to standards.

Kiri.

Wednesday, July 20, 2011

"Jurassic Park" - Zane

The Shadow Over Isla Sorna

I have always thought that Jurassic Park is a remarkable and original storyline that is perfect for sequels. However, this FanFiction piece sequel to the Jurassic Park story has gone a bit over the top.This FanFiction piece has a man called Quincy returning to Isla Sorna to check on a Spinosaurus who was a secret experiment kept by InGen, and this Spinosaurus is able to speak. To have a talking Dinosaur as a character is a bit far-fetched and breaks the credibility of the story. Jurassic Park is a great story because of how it keeps the 'what if' factor, and to have a talking Dinosaur breaks this 'what if' factor because there is no way it could be even remotely possible.

Jurassic Park: The Brotherhood

This piece of FanFiction sees Eric Kirby (boy from the third Jurassic Park movie) joining with Alex Grant (Dr. Alan Grant's son) and being tricked into going to Isla Nublar. The idea of Eric Kirby being the main character was quite a neat idea in my opinion, however in the previous Jurassic Park films, Alan Grant expressed his dislike for children and is still single with no children by the third movie making it unlikely that he would have a son. Also, the idea of being 'tricked' into going to the island has already been used in Jurassic Park 3 making the storyline a bit dull and un-original.

Over Dinner

This is meant to be a deleted scene from the first Jurassic Park movie when Tim and Lex are sitting in the dining room talking at the Jurassic Park center after Tim's close call almost being electrocuted. The scene written is quite realistic and the writer manages to capture the language used by Tim and Lex for example how they would be somewhat awkward in a compassionate situation. However, I did not particularly see the relevance of creating the scene because it doesn't add anything to the story. Also, the writer made a grammatical error when Lex says to Tim, "Do you know terrible it was to see you in the grass." It should have been, "Do you know how terrible it was to see you in the grass."

Jurassic Park: The Taks Force

This piece appears to be an alternate prelude to the Jurassic Park story. Although a little confusing, it is quite an original storyline and is interesting how Iraq bio-weapons are brought into the story. However, once again there is grammer mistakes in the first paragraph of the piece. For example, "Robert Muldoon was setting in a waiting room waiting for someone to talk to, win finally...". It should have been, "Robert Muldoon was sitting in a waiting room waiting for someone to talk to, whenn finally..." I thought this story was a bit too far from the original and was quite unnecessary.

Jurassic Park 4: Planes can crash into islands

This piece is a little disappointing. It is supposedly set after the 3rd instalment of Jurassic Park, however the beggining seems very familiar and unoriginal seeing as a plane crash landing on Isla Sauna is what happened in Jurassic Park 3. There is no character establishment and the story rushes into action far too quickly. The stepfather is guiding people over the island on a plane just like in Jurassic Park 3. No guide would refer to a Dimetrodon as a "Parasailthing" which made the story very unauthentic. There is also a lack of full stops and commas.