Clarice's Review

I'll always be with you
The fan fiction follows an episode in Season 2 of The Vampire Diaries. The characters mentioned are Damon, Stefan, Elena, Katherine, Bonnie and Jeremy. Damon and Stefan are attacking Katherine; with every injury Katherine has Elena injures it too because of a spell Katherine’s witch cast. Jeremy tries to stop Damon and Stefan from killing Katherine but it's too late. After which Damon and Stefan run to rescue Elena before she dies too.

Overall I thought that the fan fiction was quite good and accurate if this happened in that episode. Most of the speech and description that was used was good "Her pale pink top was stained with large patches of red" this gave me a visual as to what Elena was wearing and how severe her injuries were. I didn’t really like the change of having Damon and Elena together. It was interesting putting them together as the writer had to describe how Stefan was feeling "Stefan tried to hide his jealousy; he wanted to be the one holding her" this description was good because Stefan isn't Elena's boyfriend in this story. They should have included Jeremy to be at the scene of Elena’s death because he is her brother.

Final Goodbye
This fan fiction of The Vampire Diaries is mainly between two characters, Katherine and Damon. Katherine is trying to seduce Damon into leaving somewhere. Damon wants to say goodbye to someone but Katherine doesn't want him to. Katherine's seduction works on Damon but only for a short time. Damon ends up slamming the door in Katherine's face.

I thought that this fan fiction was quite short as it was only explaining one scene. I thought that the description of Katherine and her actions were very accurate in the scene "Her long, curly hair framed her face and her head was tilted coyly on the side. She held an innocent expression on her face as she moved her hands all over his body." this showed she was trying to seduce Damon. I didn't really like the end of the fan fiction as it used dialogue characters from the story would not have said “But you fuck me so well." In the Vampire Diaries the characters don’t swear. Overall I only liked the beginning and towards the end was a disappointment.

Fear
This fan fiction follows a TV series called Supernatural. The two main characters are Sam and Dean who are brothers. Dean has sold his soul to a demon in order to save is brothers life. He has been given a year to live and Sam is really determined to find a way to save him. After the year is up a demon named Lilith comes and kills Dean and there is nothing anyone can do to save him.

I thought that this fan fiction of Supernatural was really good. I liked how this is very accurate to the scene when Dean dies in Supernatural. I also like how it uses one main dialogue “I’m scared Sam. Really scared” which describes how Dean is feeling knowing that he has limited time to live. It’s good how it includes what Sam is doing “Sam is set on finding some sort of loophole in the deal, but he knows that he's not going to find anything” so the fan fiction is not all about Dean. Overall I enjoyed reading this fan fiction of Supernatural.

Time Switch
This fan fiction is an episode that uses the characters of Supernatural. It starts off with Sam saving Dean from a beam of bright blue light shooting towards Dean. Sam ends up unconscious for a few minutes. When Sam wakes up he is frightened at the sight of Dean thinking that he isn’t his brother. Dean thinks that Sam has amnesia and when he realizes that Sam thinks his eight and Dean is thirteen.

I thought that this fan fiction was really long but very good. I like the storyline of this fan fiction of how Sam saves Dean from this mysterious blue beam of light and ends up thinking that his eight years old. I liked how there was humor "If you're old, then what does that make me?" asked Dean with mock indignance."That makes you a grandpa!" replied Sam with a giggle.” I can imagine this dialogue would be used. However, there were a few grammatical errors throughout the story “He held his hands up placatingly and spoke” only small mistakes I found. Overall I really enjoyed this fan fiction and would love to see this made.

The Supernatural Vampire Diaries story
This fan fiction uses the characters from both Supernatural and The Vampire Diaries. The characters in Supernatural that are used are Sam, Dean and Castiel. The Vampire Diaries characters used are Elena, Stefan, Dean, Bonnie, Caroline, Katherine, Matt, Jeremy and Rose. Elena gets a weird feeling and calls Stefan to bring Bonnie, Caroline, Matt, Damon, Rose and himself to her house. Katherine is trapped in a tomb all she has is her diary and she writes that she misses someone. It then skips to Sam and Dean investigating Mystic Falls discovering that there are vampires and ask Castiel to join them on their hunt. Katherine back in the tomb starts screaming out Castiel’s name. Damon, Caroline and Stefan hear Katherine and wonder who he is. Rose informs them that she has once heard of Katherine mentioning Castiel but none of them know who he is. Dean, Sam and Castiel are on their way to Mystic Falls when Castiel vanishes and suddenly appears outside the tomb where Katherine is trapped.

I found that this fan fiction of Supernatural and The Vampire Diaries used a lot of dialogue to tell the story. It skipped back and forth to what Sam and Dean were doing to what the characters of the Vampire diaries were doing “I just don't know," Bonnie said."So, it's a Vampire we're dealing with?" Dean said, loading his gun with wooden bullets” this showed what Sam and Dean was doing while the other scene was taking place. I like how Katherine knew Castiel because it was unexpected. I didn’t really like this fan fiction because all they used is dialogue and not much was happening.


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